Wednesday, 25 July 2012

Jovis Activity

W.A.L.T Use commas when writing a list. 
For my writing activity I have highlighted the sentence yellow so that I have got commas. 


9.00 AM. One morning I got up, it felt like a average day but it wasn't. I was watching TV and water started to come through the windows and doors. I panicked I grabbed a bag and filled it with stuff I needed. That was food, some water not that I needed it, clothes, glue, a little mirror and my toy lightsaber. I ran outside to check what was going on and a tsunami happened!


to be continued

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